The Storyteller" Another Point of View

I am so annoyed by these kids and them not corroporating. They didn't listen to me every time I said, "Don't, their remarkes would always be, "Why?" They did not like my stories. They would fuss and scream and move around all the time just to be more datached from my storytelling. A man sitting in our party, a bachelor thought he could most definitley outdue me in storytelling. In my opinion it was the most improper story to tell little kids.Maybe he did do me aa favor for keeping them quiet, it was'nt in his place. 

Third Person Narrator: Plumber, Princess, & Attacking Turtle

Once upon a time, in a castle far, far away , there was a plumber and a princess who were happily dateing. Suddenly, while they were taking a stroll in the forest they noticed a strange sound. In response, they weren't  scared at first until this overly large figure came out of the bush. Later this figure appeared as a turtle named Brandon that wanted to attack the princess. He wanted her for himself, he was in desperate need to turn himself back into a man.  Afterward, they all agreed that the princess could do this pitiful turtle named Brandon a favor.