Monday, November 21, 2011

“’Typhoid Fever’– Present Tense Childhood Memory.”

I am around the age of six and on a Valentines Day, it was my sisters birthday. When she walked in the house she had a brown bag of candy in her hand, I was determained to get. I pretended like I was giving her a hug, and then I snatched her brown bag and ran. She chased after me immediatley. I was so scared, but before I could turn the corner she pushed me into the corner of the wall. I had the biggest scar on the left side of my face. She wouldn't stop bothering me, she called me, "Scar, from Lion King. I hated those days.

1 comment:

  1. This is in past-tense, first-person narration. :(
    This assignment needed to be written in present-tense, first-person narration.

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