Monday, August 29, 2011

Contents of the Dead Man's Pocket" Before You Read: Paralyzed by Fear

Fear Paragraph
When I was a little girl at the beach, me and my sisters were attacked by a flock of seagulls. As we were walking the shore of the ocean the seagulls were in the sky in a v-shape creation. They flew down at us as if we were food to them. I felt very scared and trapped because there was nowhere i can go they swarmed down at us to a point were it seemed as though we couldn't get out of there trap. This has changed the way I love the beach so much and how alert I am when it comes to me being around any type of birds, I'm smarter than that.

2 comments:

  1. Good job on your post I couldn't really understand the words because the line in the middle of the words other then that you did a good job:)

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  2. Thankyou so much:) sorry I was having technicall issues.

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